When my Parents were Young
Dry leaves churned on the dirt floor
Like a mini tornado
Making the little heart thump
Of fear of being swept away
Smoke from incense sticks before the Gods
Made damp patterns in the air
Revealing a message
Saturated with strong optimism
The snakes in the bushes
Feared the gold-bangled hand
That whisked at them with a stick
Bearing the bright shield of protection
Roads were longer
Distances vast
The little girl curled in the back of the car
Reveling at the endless joy ride
Hunger was not in the dictionary
Freedom was
Failure was not a prospect
Victory was
Fights weren’t anathema
Verbal abuses sweet
Tears and laughter weighed the same
As if they were twins
Bright days drove away long nights
Restful sleep bounded after bad dreams
The saree that smelled of curry
Ducked the baby under its cover
The world kept being conquered everyday
With a letter, a word
A single smile created infinite dreams
When my parents were young
Youth replaced childhood
Ineptitude with skill
Ignorance took a beat
While adulthood thrilled
I ran amuck vast skies
Plucking out the stars
Sprinkling them around me
To catch them sparkle their last
I lived my separate life
And thence took theirs from them
Adding my 'black' to theirs
Until it became too dark to comprehend
Pervading the empty lung
For the air does not smell the same
As when my parents were young.
3 comments:
Subject: RE: musings!
Date: Thu, 3 Apr 2008 17:23:40 Binod Nayak
binodnayak@hotmail.com wrote:
Julie:
Thank you for sending these beautiful poems. In a long time I have not come across poems that are so "meditative" -- so "transcendental." Needless to say, both the poems are musings of a "mature mind" that looks at life and the world with such detachment, that even can make the sages envious. But at the same time they are so worldly -- so much grounded in the "stuff" of life that makes us so human. It is this "duality" that these poems present that makes you escape the realities of life -- even for a moment!
Besides these poems are lyrical -- they have "chhanda" -- without even having "jatipaata."
Bhaina
Really heart rending reading for me and mummy. We couldn't resist gasping when it came to the passge
"Incense sticks still ember.."
But the finest expression is the previous stanza beginning with " I ran amuck vast skies..." We enjoyed the lovely sight of our baby running amuck in the vast skies picking out the stars.Packed with splendid imageries. Maturity acheived at last. Send this poem to some reputed poetry journal if you can for greater acclamation. Congratulations. Mummy and Nana
Hi! went through your blogs and poems. Nice poems. I liked your thoughts about God. I post my poems on muse india, a very encouraging journal. Visit www.museindia.com and am sure you will enjoyposting in an open forum called "your space".
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